Thursday, March 12, 2020

When plans collide (Storyboard ft. final outline+Radio Script)

What's good everyone?

So today was actually a very productive day. I asked Tstock for Storyboard paper. Given that we already had a final outline, I just sketched out the first scenes that are honestly just going to be repeated a bunch of times and help make up the bulk of the exposition of this shirt film.

The actual storyboard

This series of sketches I made for our storyboard also feature some minor instructions for myself. If the actual content of the shot's changes slightly that's a-ok, so long as the bulk/premise of the actual scene stays the same.This came at a perfect time, because Jules and I just wrapped up our final outline COMBINED with the Radio script, which I will feature below.

This post, while admittedly kinda barebones, is just a reflection of the fact that we're gonna be kicking into high gear next week and get this bad boy shot and edited during spring break if all stays on schedule, so I cam trade one bareish post for one great project.

Later y'all, still don't know how to log off in a cool way!
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Outline
  • Man wakes up to the radio. House is very bare but very bright. Cant see face yet and is avoiding.
  • Amore Mio Aiutami-esque music playing
  • Intermittent radio chatter “remember to smile” “always be happy” radio gets progressively more aggressive 
  1. Feet on floor
Good morning! It's October 4th, it's gonna be sunny remember to show the world those pearly whites at all times->fade out 
  1. Walk to kitchen
  2. Make coffee
  3. Take showers
  4. Brush teeth in fogged up glass 
  5. Get dressed 
  6. Look in mirror 
You look great! Ready to take on the day! Forgetting something? *sound* You look GREAT! And remember, don't stop smiling
  • Man smiles a toothy grin at himself and and turns around 
  1. Feet on floor
Good morning! It's November 5th and a brand new day! Now go get ready to give the world the smile of a lifetime>fade out 
  1. Walk to kitchen
  2. Make coffee
  3. Take shower
  4. Brush teeth in fogged up glass 
  5. Get dressed 
  6. Look in mirror
  • Man looks in mirror smiles without teeth
Come on now, don't make me force that smile out of you listener…there we go! Another bright set of teeth! Don't stop smiling, this has been sound o' smiles
  1. Feet on floor
Good morning!
  1. Make coffee
  2. Take shower
 It's December 6th 
  1. Brush teeth in fogged up glass 
  2. Get dressed 
  3. Look in mirror
  • Man begins to play with his face to try to contort a smile. Takes out a marker and draws a smile 
Not feeling it today? That's ok! Everyone, and I mean everyone, has those days. You know what I do when I feel down, listener? I do what I can to fix it. Now you do what you can and SMILE!
  1. Feet on floor
Good morning! It's January 7th and it's time to get up and be in the world one more time!
  1. Walk to kitchen
  2. Make coffee
The president made some announcements
  1. Take shower in dark 
  2. Brush teeth in fogged up glass 
Meaning the Cubs are on their way to the world series
  1. Get dressed 
  2. Look in mirror
That's far from the best you can do. Are you even trying today? You can do much better than this sorrow...you know what you have to do...There we go, no more frowns! Keep it up champ, you look GREAT!
  • Man twists coat hanger to try to make himself smile
  1. Feet on floor
Wake up, or can you not even do that anymore
  1. Walk to kitchen
You haven't eaten in days, why do you even do this anymore?
  1. Make coffee
No one want you around anymore now that you can't smile right
  1. Take shower in the dark 
Try harder Champ, you know what you have to do
  1. Brush teeth in fogged up glass (cuts on side of mouth)
Come on tiger, do it *faint at first, then loud* do it, do it…*devolves into screeching mess full of expletives*
  1. Get dressed 
  2. Look in mirror
  • Man cuts a smile in the side of his mouth (think joker) 
  1. Man doesn't like what he sees
  2. Cuts again, this time deeper and more erratically
  3. Stares at f-ed up face, which is now half blood/half skin
  4. Puts down knife and gets dresses->gets blood on clothes
  5. Gets in shower to wash blood
  6. Puts on clothes
  7. Greets other person at door, their face is also scarred over/deformed
  • CUT BLACK"

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